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  • May. 25th, 2030 at 1:43 PM
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Following the example here. Because I love you all and I've been dying for concrit and the like for a long while now. I've been curious as to how I play Arche, Jade, Natalia, and all of my characters for a long while now. Arche's been bouncing around all over the place and is my character with quite likely the most CR. I understand that Jade and Natalia aren't nearly as social, but I try to have them post the adequate amount considering where we are in the plot. And whether or not they're injured comes into account too. -cough-

Ms. Ema Skye of Apollo Justice is someone I also try to be careful with. So it'd really help if I could get some form of help with her, any way at all.

I try to keep concrit in mind as much as possible and stick to it. If you wish to contact and talk to me directly about it, I will listen the best that I can and keep in mind the advice I'm given. I like to think that I'm rather polite and willing to listen. Of course, this all depends on the factor that the criticism I'm given is constructive and not just vague accusations. Please and thank you~

So, my characters are as following:
Jade Curtiss  [info]enemy_or_ally 
Natalia L.K. Lanvaldear [info]as_nobility 
Arche Klaine [info]cutest_witch 
Ema Skye [info]science_ismagic 
Megumi Yamamoto [info]sketchpad_s_a 

And ways to get in contact with me?
Regular AIM: proud illusion
Arche's: unending skies
E-Mail: hanagumi.doll@gmail.com 

Oh yes, and comments are screened and anonymous comments are allowed~

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[rl with kaito - off to the park!]

  • Jan. 1st, 2009 at 10:33 PM
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The day was bright, the voices of all the random people on the street were chattering, and there were cheers to the new year all around the park. In the midst of all this, Arche walked down the pathway with a skip in her step and a smile on her face. All the while trying to ignore the throbbing headache she had.

But other than that, she had no signs of the usual hangover. If only because she actually drank some of the water that Kaito suggested once they got out of the crowds. But unlike what Kaito suggested, she was determined to get out of the house and spend some time outside on the first day of the new year, headache or no headache. The half-elf admired the sights as she walked, still not completely used to the absolute lack of monsters on Earth.

Turning on her heel, she looked back at Kaito and grinned as she walked backwards, "You don't know how lucky you are to live here. Or at least, in this area."

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[Fail!Lock]

  • Oct. 9th, 2008 at 4:43 PM
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...I hadn't heard from Chester in a while. ...Weird.

He left me before because of the problem in Meltokio but, what's the reason this time?
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Jacky! Ms. Blushing Bride-to-be! Okay, help me get things a little more organized, okay? Considering the wedding and all.

I won't choose a date or location for you, that should be between you and Kratos. Buuut, I do expect to be notified so I can get all the decor to match. The color scheme is key part of it!

And the guest list! That needs to be set up too.

I'm thinking...
- Lukey and all his friends. The Colonel's optional, dunno if you want him around... I know that he and Kratos argue on occasion.
- The family you had during the family virus, which I still need to be filled in on.
- Lloyd, Zelos, Colette, and Genis. And whoever else they want to bring along from Sylvarant.
- Chester, of course. I'll leave it up to you whether or not I can invite the rest of my friends.
- Um... Any friends you might want to bring along? Close ones only, you want this to be a small, intimate sort of affair, right?

...Think we can fit Kaito on the guest list? Pleeeaaase? And once we decide on who's coming, don't worry about invites, I'll take care of it.

Oh! And I'll need a worldhop to whatever location you two choose. I can't help much from Aselia, right?

The rest of the things, like vows and what you want on the menu can be decided between you and Kratos. But I demand to know what you plan on wearing for the wedding and honeymoon. Never hurts for a second opinion, right?

Entry 19: Going home? Maybe.

  • Aug. 30th, 2008 at 8:29 AM
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Kaito~ I think I'll be heading off. Do you think you can manage a month or so without me?

At least you get your room back. I didn't swipe anything, I swear. I think I left your wallet on top of your cabinet, so don't start freaking out on me.

Let's not make this a tearful farewell, I know you'll miss having me mess around in your room while you're stuck with the couch.

Entry 18: After the living poster incident~

  • Aug. 20th, 2008 at 11:30 PM
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[Flimsily Locked to Kaito ; Feel free to hack, she's being vague anyway]

Sooooo.

That was more fun that I had in a while. Aselia gets so boring after all. Thanks for inviting me, Kaito. Mind if I keep some of the stickers? I think I could use them for something when I get back... How do you think Master Klarth would react to having some ponies on his spellbooks?

[/Lock]

[Locked from Hakuba]

So when's the birthday party? I like your world Kaito, although some people do look at me kind of strangely. Mind if I buy some normal clothes before we go to the party? 

I'll pay you back in gald when you stop by Aselia~ I'm pretty sure there's a few souveneirs you'd like to check out. I am the one setting up the time-traveling party.

Entry 17: Off on another trip~

  • Aug. 20th, 2008 at 12:48 AM
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Hey Chester, you can postpone your trip to Auldrant for a while, okay? I won't be around. I really only stuck around because I didn't think Allen was in much of a state to be worldhopping a lot.

But now that he's off in his own world, and teaching no less, I've been meaning to visit a friend of mine. Kaye gave me a worldhop and I'll be staying over at his house for a while. Don't worry, he's treating me pretty well. ♥ So no worries there!

Ah, which reminds me. Kaito~ What does it take to get a girl some melon bread? Or just regular melon. I'm not feeling picky.

[OOC: Just a note for Chester~ And while Arche never made an official request, Kaye-mun said that it was all right to have it assumed. And she's already at Kaito's house by now. In his room. Making herself comfy on his bed while he goes to sleep on the couch. Many thanks, BFF~]

Entry 16: Aftermath~

  • Aug. 3rd, 2008 at 7:12 PM
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So, can I be blamed if I enjoyed that last virus a little bit?

Lukey~ I enjoyed having you as my big brother, really. ♥ The gald was definitely a bonus. And watching you mess up in the kitchen was even more fun. Mind if we do it again sometime? I think we all need a little pick-me-up right now anyway.

Kaye! Well... I already kinda consider you to be my sister in a way. So it was pretty natural. Next time I drag Lukey to go shopping, come with us, okay~?

Hmmm... I don't know you that well, Tear. That needs to change. But the food was excellent~ ♥

...

He's not awake yet. I'll talk to him later. When he's healthy. And sane. ...And doesn't hate me.

[Private; Unhackable]
Didn't have a mom this time around either. Wonder what that means. Oh well. I'm content with what I have in reality. This was just a silly little thing anyway. Can't take it too seriously.

Entry 15: Oh Lukey-ukey-ukey-ukey~

  • Jul. 27th, 2008 at 1:18 AM
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Ne, ne, Lukey! You got any gald on you?

I'm all out and it's such a pain to feel the emptiness of your pockets.

Maybe you can be a good big brother for once and take me out shopping? You can get some candy~ Or you know, swords. Whatever it is that you're into these days. 

Yuan-papa! Can you get Lukey to take me somewhere? It'd get us out of your hair~

[OOC: After-dated~ As in like, later today, or after the Abyss cast visited Yuan in the hospital.]

Entry 14: Locked ;; Quite Hackable

  • Jul. 5th, 2008 at 1:43 AM
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 Everyone...seems to be having a rough time lately.

That's all... too bad. I... don't know how to help everyone anymore.

Things just aren't that simple, I guess. Or people think I'm too simple-minded to be of any help.

....Who are they to criticize a genius?!

But...still. There's apparently a lot more trouble in this world (...er, timeline?) than I had originally taken it for.

[RL - Talking With Kaye]

  • Jul. 4th, 2008 at 7:49 PM
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 "No two snowflakes are the same, huh?" Arche mused as she leaned on the railing as she overlooked the beautiful view in front of the church, grateful for her gloves she brushed off some of the snow that had fallen onto it. Letting out a breath, she watched as her breath became visible. Oh, days like these reminded her that she had better get the Yggdrasill mess over with so she could  go and catch some more polar bears with Allen.

It was no better now that Chester had left her to go back to their own time. Something about recruiting Mint and Cless, because she didn't hear much after "I'm heading back." Of course, he invited her to go back with him, but after some debate she said rather stubbornly that she'd be staying. Everyone was gathering in Meltokio, and they were bound to be expecting at least one of them.

'And one is what they're going to get...' she thought with a sigh as the snow continued to fall over her and onto her. Her finger was making a circle pattern on the railing as she continued to wait for Kaye to show up. Kaye had wanted to talk about something, and Arche was quick to suggest meeting in front of the church. This view was one to be shared with others, after all.

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Entry 13: Solo Act

  • Jun. 30th, 2008 at 5:22 PM
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Chester went back to Aselia, saying something about how maybe Cless and Mint could help out with this. He means well, but I don't think he meant to make me lonely.

I'd better be heading to Meltokio soon, who knows what would happen if people found out that a half-elf was wandering around on her own. I'm still not sure what to think of the racial difference in this time... But nevermind that. How's everyone else working out over there?

I meant to head over to Meltokio a while ago. Sorry to make you guys wait. I guess things just got complicated.

[Locked to Kratos; unhackable]
How was the little family meeting, Kratos~?
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Entry 12: Polar Bears and Lions~

  • Apr. 19th, 2008 at 11:46 AM
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First off to Kenya with Lloyd, and then I'm going to go help Allen with polar bears. Busy busy~ Maybe I'll go back to Lloyd's time for an extended visit and go see Zelos or Kratos... Haven't heard from Yuan-ti for a while either. Not to mention the plans I made with Jacky....

Chester, now that we're not tied anymore, I think you can manage to return to your training while I go off to hang out with some friends. You don't mind, right~?

Entry 11: Tied-Up Virus

  • Apr. 13th, 2008 at 11:09 AM
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Why handcuffs? Why?

Why not something softer? Handcuffs just seem so... wrong. I've already said I'm not into this type of thing before....

But at the very least, I can't complain about who I'm tied with. ♥ 

I'm sure the base can be handled while I'm away~

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Stuck... in a desert... Stuck in a base in the desert, really... Yuan-ti left a while ago. Still don't know where he went... Makes me a little worried... But I guess he can take care of himself. I really should have gone after him instead of Kaye...

Meanwhile, I'm looking after the base, scaring away any idiots who try to break in. Don't blame 'em either, Yuan-ti has some pretty nice stuff! At least, from what I've observed in the few rooms I've been in.

...I need a vacation.

Entry 09: [Failed!Lock]

  • Mar. 29th, 2008 at 1:15 PM
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He's destroying every idea I have on how to help. I think I'm in way over my head.

...I need a vacation. I hear that Meltokio's a nice place to visit. If only I knew where Lloyd is....

[RL with Yuan: INTERROGATION]

  • Mar. 25th, 2008 at 9:29 PM
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 [Pacing back and forth in the front area of the base. Sits down occasionally, pausing to bite her fingernails before standing right back up again. Her broom is left at the side of the room, and she has already picked it up numerous times in an attempt to decide whether or not to go looking for Yuan. Sighs constantly and feeling very panicked. Her brain is filled with worries of breaking promises. LOOK AT WHAT YOU HAVE DONE, YUAN-TI.]

Entry 08: [Locked from Yuan]

  • Mar. 22nd, 2008 at 11:11 PM
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How can you fix something so broken? It's like the remains were taken and shattered even into further disorder.

Yuan-ti.... He's not well. I can't... But I can't leave him. Not even for a second.

When I went to Lloyd's time, I didn't expect it to end up like this.

Chester... I don't want to fight anymore.
I guess my theory was wrong, look at where it's gotten Yuan-ti....
And I won't be visiting for a few days. I've got to take care of Yuan-ti.

[OOC: After-dated to take place the morning after this. OMG HURRICANE YUADE.]

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 Dammit!

Why do you have to be 100 years in the future, huh, Chester?

And I shouldn't have to tell you how tempting it sounds to go back 4,000 years too.

Especially at a time like this.

You can't expect me to just stay airborne all day, do you?

...Although it seems that if I so much as land on the ground the chances of me cheating on you are pretty high...

Oh...And stay away from Mint. Lay so much as a hand on her and you're dead.

[Strikes Hackable]

OOC: Relationship Meme

  • Jan. 21st, 2008 at 3:59 PM
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I tried to resist joining in, but I just couldn't help it. ;o;

Comment with what characters you play, and I'll let you know what my characters think of them.


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Natalia Luzu Kimlasca-Lanvaldear [info]as_nobility
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Arche Klaine [info]cutest_witch

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